‘Erasure poetry’ is defined as a form of ‘found poetry’ or ‘found art’ created by erasing words from an existing text in prose or verse and framing the result on the page as a poem.
This piece is based largely on a feature and blog post by former BBC correspondent Andrew Whitehead, whose sympathetic research has helped to rescue the short existence of Victoria M Sofaer, a young Baghdadi Jewish woman, from total oblivion.
I have attempted to use an ‘erasure’ style format to echo - metaphorize – what happened to Victoria.
Most of the words in this piece are Whitehead’s, along with some of my own.
Restoring Miss Toyah
In Chennai, once Madras,
lies a half-forgotten resting
place for the twice re-settled
residue of the town’s long-time
Jewish dead.
Here, half-faded, and one
further step removed, stands
a solitary gravestone illumined
briefly by a shaft of sunlight
sifting through the trees.
So mystery’s spotlight
shines for the moment
on ‘Miss Victoria M Sofaer’,
lying for eternity aged only
twenty-two.
Who was she?
How did she end
in Chennai? Why
did she meet her
death so young?
Baghdad beginnings had
also ended in an untimely
end when Victoria’s (‘Toyah’)
birth led to her mother,
Dina’s death.
Then in 1939, perhaps 1940,
as a second universal war
began, Toyah romanced an
Armenian man.
From different worlds,
different religions, they
met in secret and when
Toyah's family found out,
they sought to marry her to a
Jewish boy.
But she rejected all suitable
suitors and was shipped out
to India in disgrace.
Towards the close of 1942,
Toyah’s father, Menashi and
Naima, his second wife, who
was Dina’s sister and so Toyah’s
aunt, arrived in Bombay with his
daughter in tow.
There onlookers saw something
in Toyah - her face and demeanour –
that deeply perplexed them.
Her silence left an impression
of a person in shock. There
was something mysterious;
most difficult to understand.
She would not utter a word.
After some time, the three
moved on. In another
Indian city, Toyah died.
So her parents returned
to Baghdad.
Abraham, Toyah’s only surviving
half-brother, now aged 94 and
once the closest to her in the
entire family, still wonders what
caused her untimely demise.
The doctor who had looked after
her in India felt the urge to
tell the authorities about her
serious decline and the role
her parents played.
But he did not pursue this.
The Armenian lover also felt
the need to alert the authorities
about Toyah's deplorable condition
and the role that her parents
played in her incarceration.
But he did not go through with
this idea, either.
So there was no public scandal.
Even within the Jewish
community in Baghdad,
the romance was hushed up.
No-one talked of how Toyah
had died from a broken heart.
And there is yet one more
tragic aspect to this tale:
One rare photo shows Toyah’s
three half-brothers : Elias, the oldest
and tallest; Abraham, standing beside
him and Jack, the toddler.
It was taken in 1927 when Toyah
was aged seven.
Why isn’t she there?
But she once was!
On Elias's left!
After her death, the
image was retouched
to excise her likeness.
This was to ensure there
would be no reminder of the
scandal and tragedy of her life.
Then there are unfounded rumours
of a Baghdadi Jewish custom;
that when people died all pictures
of them were destroyed.
Still, one further photo,
shot in Baghdad, probably
in the early thirties, shows
Grand mère Farha Shamash;
her husband, Saleh and Toyah’s aunt,
Khatoun Meir.
Then – finally – stands
a girl with wavy hair, peeping
out above Khatoun’s head.
This may, just may, be
Toyah Sofaer.
© Natalie Wood (04 July 2017)
1 comment:
She was aged only 22, so perhaps Toyah Sofaer died from 'broken heart' syndrome'. Scientists now say the phenomenon exists (See Saga newsletter link:.http://www.saga.co.uk/…/cardiovasc…/one-womans-heart-attack…|pub|health|na|Mag_Health_Newsletter|Control|03_July_2017|Article). I must acknowledge that the idea would have been considered outrageously fanciful in the 1940s. So as we peel back the layers of this unappetising family drama, it becomes clearer and clearer that Toyah was the victim of what may be described as a bloodless 'honour killing'. Family reputation was beyond price. Of course.
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